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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
at 5:30
it has a home lock mode which rearranges the control to set it up in such a way that it gives you a little bit more of an intuiative feel...
Is this better?
it has a home lock mode which rearranges the control to set it up in such a way giving you a little bit more of an intuiative feel...
Or is the use of "in such a way" incorrect or too wordy?
Thank you
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giving or give
at 5:30
it has a home lock mode which rearranges the control to set it up in such a way that it gives you a little bit more of an intuiative feel...
Is this better?
it has a home lock mode which rearranges the control to set it up in such a way giving you a little bit more of an intuiative feel...
Or is the use of "in such a way" incorrect or too wordy?
Thank you
Top answer
Anonymous Is this better? No, it's worse. Anonymous Or is the use of "in such a way" incorrect or too wordy?
- Anonymous Is this better?
- No, it's worse.
- Anonymous Or is the use of "in such a way" incorrect or too wordy?
- In itself, this phrase is fine.
- However, "...
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AnonymousIs this better?No, it's worse.
AnonymousOr is the use of "in such a way" incorrect or too wordy?In itself, this phrase is fine. However, "... in such a way giving you ..." does not flow properly.
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Can you say the following instead?
it has a home lock mode which rearranges the control a little more intuitively.
it has a home lock mode which rearranges the control a little more intuitively.
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AnonymousCan you say the following instead? it has a home lock mode which rearranges the control a little more intuitively.Yes.
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