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Chiachen Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Give advice to a friend

In response to a friend's email stating that he thinks he found his perfect match online!d, is in love and wants to meet her right away! In it, he asked for your advice as to what he should do. Hence the writing below:

I'm glad that you're so happy and excited to have known this girl, but please, pay attention. You can't say that you're in love, if you didn't meet her yet!! Above all, you must be sure that you can trust her, if you want to meet her! Do you understand?!?! Come on, don't let yourself be overwhelmed by the mystery! You should calm down and make your choice carefully! ok?

Keep me informed!

Any suggestions/corrections?

Thank you!
  

Top answer

I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and post your revised text here. I'm glad that you're so happy and excited to have known this girl, but ple ase, pay attention .

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please correct them and post your revised text here.
  • I'm glad that you're so happy and excited to have known this girl, but ple ase, pay attention .
  • You can't say that you're in love, if you didn't meet her ye t!!
  • Above all, you must be sure that you can trust her, if you want to meet he r!
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and post your revised text here.

I'm glad that you're so happy and excited to have known this girl, but please, pay attention. You can't say that you're in love, if you didn't meet her yet!! Above all, you must be sure that you can trust her, if you want to meet her! Do you understa
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Thank you. I am glad that you are so happy and excited to know this girl, but what made(warranted) you (to) say you're in love if you haven't even met her in person? Above all, you must do do some fact (background) check and are certain that you trust her enough before meeting her. Hope you'd get what I'm saying. You must not let yourself be caught in the whirlwind of this online dating craze.
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That's better.

I am glad that you are so happy and excited to know this girl, but why do you say you're in love if you haven't even met her in person? Above all, you must do some fact/background checking and be certain that you trust her enough before meeting her. I hope you understand what I'm saying. You must not let yourself be caught in the whirlwind
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