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Selecter Posted 19 years ago

Girl's fragile heart (not completed)

0 This was one of my why-not-to-try poems. Please feel free to say anything you'd like.02br
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01i00 A girl whose naked eyes ablaze02br
00 Can't lie reflecting tears of craze02br
00 A pearl which glint has lost its glow02br
00 Like cane was dutiful to bow02br
00 A mortal blade is strong and sharp02br
00 As words that broke her fragile heart02i
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0...The blade was curious to cut,02br
00So many times it felt the blood,02br
00of every person who can love02br
00and of its sugar-tasting heart.02br
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00That girl was not the first and last:02br
00However, when her turn has come 02br
00she felt as if she was the only one 02br
00whose soul should rise
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0 You are so optimistic :-) Thanks for ending this.0-

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