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Offroad Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Getting to know the beaches

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Before you step ahead, it must be said that you will find the natives very welcoming and kind. The weather is sunny most of the time, perfect for getting a tan over the many beaches there are nearby.Just to name a few, you will hear a lot about 'Ponta Negra', 'Genipabu' and even 'Pipa'. Tons of people go there, it's really happening. Saturday nights are the best. So, cutting to the chase, let us say that it is more convenient to go the beaches during the day and visit pubs, malls and such in the nights.

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), it must be said that you will find the natives very welcoming and kind. The weather is sunny most of the time, perfect for getting a tan over the many beaches there are nearby. Just to name a few , you will hear a lot about 'Ponta Negra', 'Genipabu', and even 'Pipa'.

— Mister Micawber

  • ), it must be said that you will find the natives very welcoming and kind.
  • The weather is sunny most of the time, perfect for getting a tan over the many beaches there are nearby.
  • Just to name a few , you will hear a lot about 'Ponta Negra', 'Genipabu', and even 'Pipa'.
  • Tons of people go the re, it 's really happening.
  • Saturday nights are the best.
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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage:

Before you step ahead (?), it must be said that you will find the natives very welcoming and kind. The weather is sunny most of the time, perfect for getting a tan over the many beaches there are nearby. Just to name a few, you will hear a lot about 'Ponta Negra', '
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