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It’s nearly impossible to get to know Natal without visiting the many beaches dotted around this city. It’s sunny every day, so that describing a rainy day here may sound odd or even worse; it might put a damper on things. Best-known as “The City Of The Sun”, Natal is beautiful, warm and welcoming. So, if you are here to visit, google the city to know what’s on. The city is blessed with an abundance of fabulous and happening beaches, it is certain that you’ll hear about Ponta Negra, the city’s most famous beach, anything can be found there. If you like the wind, rent a car and drive along the coast, order fish with an icy cold beer and you’ll be blown away by the beautiful landscape. The night life is also interesting; there are places for every pocket or taste. If you enjoy seeing movies, there are easy-to-find malls just 5-10 minutes away from any hotel you are staying at. Unlike most big cities, the only risk here is wanting to stay.
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Could you please proofread this paragraph?
It’s nearly impossible to get to know Natal without visiting the many beaches dotted around this city. It’s sunny every day, so that describing a rainy day here may sound odd or even worse; it might put a damper on things. Best-known as “The City Of The Sun”, Natal is beautiful, warm and welcoming. So, if you are here to visit, google the city to know what’s on. The city is blessed with an abundance of fabulous and happening beaches, it is certain that you’ll hear about Ponta Negra, the city’s most famous beach, anything can be found there. If you like the wind, rent a car and drive along the coast, order fish with an icy cold beer and you’ll be blown away by the beautiful landscape. The night life is also interesting; there are places for every pocket or taste. If you enjoy seeing movies, there are easy-to-find malls just 5-10 minutes away from any hotel you are staying at. Unlike most big cities, the only risk here is wanting to stay.
Thank you very much
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It's nicely worded really. In the following section, you should separate the sentences with periods or semicolons where I've put it in bold. The city is blessed with an abundance of fabulous and happening beaches, it is certain that you'll hear about Ponta Negra, the c ity's most famous beach, anything can be found there.
- It's nicely worded really.
- In the following section, you should separate the sentences with periods or semicolons where I've put it in bold.
- The city is blessed with an abundance of fabulous and happening beaches, it is certain that you'll hear about Ponta Negra, the c ity's most famous beach, anything can be found there.
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It's nicely worded really. In the following section, you should separate the sentences with periods or semicolons where I've put it in bold.
The city is blessed with an abundance of fabulous and happening beaches, it is certain that you'll hear about Ponta Negra, the city's most famous beach, anything can be found there.
The city is blessed with an abundance of fabulous and happening beaches, it is certain that you'll hear about Ponta Negra, the city's most famous beach, anything can be found there.
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