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Contiluo Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Get a full refund
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Ten years ago, I took a break travel to the US with my three-year-old son. We lodged at a relative’s house. He gave me a brand-new child safety seat and said, “Demanded by the traffic laws here, a child must be seated in the child safety seat in a car. This one is for you. Please try not to smear it as much as possible because it was borrowed from somebody and I shall give it back to its owner.”
Two weeks later, I no longer needed to drive. He returned the half-new child safety seat back to the hypermarket to get his money back in full. He smugly said, “In the US, stores take goods back if customers can produce the receipt. If goods are returned within two weeks, customers will get a full refund on items. So we often come here to ‘borrow’ something in this way. More than this, some mainlanders from China even ‘borrow’ TV sets in this way. You see? Aren’t Americans stupid? The loophole of unconditional refund is so big that it allows people to easily exploit the system. It’s unbelievable that management seems to be unaware of this loophole.”
Ten years ago, I took a break travel to the US with my three-year-old son. We lodged at a relative’s house. He gave me a brand-new child safety seat and said, “Demanded by the traffic laws here, a child must be seated in the child safety seat in a car. This one is for you. Please try not to smear it as much as possible because it was borrowed from somebody and I shall give it back to its owner.”
Two weeks later, I no longer needed to drive. He returned the half-new child safety seat back to the hypermarket to get his money back in full. He smugly said, “In the US, stores take goods back if customers can produce the receipt. If goods are returned within two weeks, customers will get a full refund on items. So we often come here to ‘borrow’ something in this way. More than this, some mainlanders from China even ‘borrow’ TV sets in this way. You see? Aren’t Americans stupid? The loophole of unconditional refund is so big that it allows people to easily exploit the system. It’s unbelievable that management seems to be unaware of this loophole.”
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Ten years ago, I took a break to travel to the US with my three-year-old son. We lodged at a relative’s house. He gave me a brand-new child safety seat and said, “ As d emanded by the traffic laws here, a child must be seated in the a child safety seat in a car.
- Ten years ago, I took a break to travel to the US with my three-year-old son.
- We lodged at a relative’s house.
- He gave me a brand-new child safety seat and said, “ As d emanded by the traffic laws here, a child must be seated in the a child safety seat in a car.
- This one is for you.
- ” Two weeks later, I no longer needed to drive.
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Ten years ago, I took a break to travel to the US with my three-year-old son. We lodged at a relative’s house. He gave me a brand-new child safety seat and said, “As demanded by the traffic laws here, a child must be seated in the a child safety seat in a car. This one is for you. Please try not to smear it as much as possible to keep it cleaned and un
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