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StevenMunich Posted 10 years ago
Medical & Dental Studies

German translation problem

Hi guys, hope you can help me. In German we tend to use overly long sentences which isn't so elegant in English.

Does this translation sound right to you?

"During the night, the tissue gets restored to its youthful functional state and signs of structural damage are thus sustainably reduced."
  

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I suggest: Overnight , the tissue is restored to its youthful functionality and signs of structural damage are reduced.

  • I suggest: Overnight , the tissue is restored to its youthful functionality and signs of structural damage are reduced.
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I suggest:

Overnight, the tissue is restored to its youthful functionality and signs of structural damage are reduced.
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StevenMunichDuring the night, the tissue gets restored to its youthful and functional state, and signs of structural damage are, thus, sustainably noticeably/markedly reduced."
[ cross-posted with Mister Micawber ]

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