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Nat_16 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

general english grammer

i am making a horror short film.so i need my film description to be corrected by anyone.here's my description--->
"if there is a positive ,there will be a negative
if there is a light,there will be a dark
if there is a god,there will be a demon"

can anyone please correct this ..
  

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If there is a positive, there will be a negative if there is light, there will be darkness if there is a ***, there will be a demon In my opinion the above, whilst grammatically correct English, doesn't quite stylistically or semantically fit. I'd be tempted to rewrite as follows Where there's good, there's evil... Where there's light, darkness will follow...

— Rick Terry

  • If there is a positive, there will be a negative if there is light, there will be darkness if there is a ***, there will be a demon In my opinion the above, whilst grammatically correct English, doesn't quite stylistically or semantically fit.
  • I'd be tempted to rewrite as follows Where there's good, there's evil...
  • Where there's light, darkness will follow...
  • And if there's a ***, there will be demons...
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If there is a positive, there will be a negative
if there is light, there will be darkness
if there is a ***, there will be a demon

In my opinion the above, whilst grammatically correct English, doesn't quite stylistically or semantically fit. I'd be tempted to rewrite as follows

Where there's good, there's evil...
Where there's light, darkness will follow...
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ya thanks,this one is good .i will use it in my project!!:-D
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Please note the correct spelling of grammar,
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