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Two display boards have been got made for displaying the names of those who served as Deans of the School as well as Heads of the Departments during the respective periods. It is proposed that radium lettering be had on the boards with the necessary background to enhance the appearance as well as for long durability.

With regards,
T.V. Gopal
  

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Here is one possible solution.... Two display boards have been made for displaying the names of those who served as Deans of the School as well as Heads of the Departments during the respective periods. It is proposed that radium lettering be used on the boards with the necessary background to enhance the appearance and to increase the durability.

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  • Two display boards have been made for displaying the names of those who served as Deans of the School as well as Heads of the Departments during the respective periods.
  • It is proposed that radium lettering be used on the boards with the necessary background to enhance the appearance and to increase the durability.
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  • Your second sentence is passive.
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Here is one possible solution....

Two display boards have been made for displaying the names of those who served as Deans of the School as well as Heads of the Departments during the respective periods. It is proposed that radium lettering be used on the boards with the necessary background to enhance the appearance and to increase the durability.


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Two display boards have been made for displaying the names of former Deans of the Schools and Heads of the Departments including their tenure.It.......

My question to mountainhiker!
Don't u think 'their respective periods' is better than 'the respective periods'

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Agreed, good change.

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