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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

gazed

I don't regret that I gazed you so long at the b'day because that still hang in my head that cherished your image for a while.

Are they correct?

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Hi BW. '. This is better as it means 'this sentence'.

— Nona the brit

  • Hi BW.
  • '.
  • This is better as it means 'this sentence'.
  • I assume you mean birthday.
  • Birthday is not abbreviated to b'day.
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Hi BW. You only have one sentence in your posts so you should ask 'Is this correct?' or 'Is it correct?'. This is better as it means 'this sentence'.

I assume you mean birthday. Birthday is not abbreviated to b'day. If you say b'day then it sounds like bidet and believe me you would be a bit of a pervert if you watched someone at a bidet! Also, birthday is not a place you can be 'at'.
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Thank you Nona,

Can I say:

I don't regret that I gazed you for so long at the birthday party because that gazing still hangs in my head to cherish the sight of you a while.
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No, the parts in red aren't OK in the context:

I don't regret that I gazed you for so long at the birthday party because that gazing still hangs in my head to cherish the sight of you a while.
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Thank you MH,

May I ask why it isn't ok?
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No, I am going to let you find passages similar to what you wrote, because I don't think you will. Use good models.
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