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TOOSMILEY Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Gay Adoption-Intro Help!!! Please

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00I am writing a argumentive essay on gay adoption and I am having a struggle coming up with a good intro. I am good "paragraph and conclusion" , but i struggle with Intro's for some reason. Can someone give me some ideas.. Thanks in advance02br
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  • 00It's Discrimination not to allow gays to adopt, sexual preference does not say that someone can't be a good parent. 02br
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  • 00It will not have a psycological affect.or confuse a child. 02br
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  • 00It's better for a child to a have a loving family , as oppose to foster care and orphanges 02br
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  • 00Many concervatives view this as wrong and I belive that is bigotry02li
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02br 02br 00You might say that "gay adoption" (which should be explained in more detail than just those two words) is a controversial subject that has aroused people of opposing viewpoints. Then you could add that you find one point of view to be more valid (convincing? logical?

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  • 02br 02br 00You might say that "gay adoption" (which should be explained in more detail than just those two words) is a controversial subject that has aroused people of opposing viewpoints.
  • Then you could add that you find one point of view to be more valid (convincing?
  • logical?
  • whatever word/words you prefer) than the other.
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0Hi, Toosmiley02br
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00Here are a few of my ideas.02br
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00You might say that "gay adoption" (which should be explained in more detail than just those two words) is a controversial subject that has aroused people of opposing viewpoints. Then you could add that you find one point of view to be more valid (convincing? logical? ....whatever word/words y
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0Here is what I have so far for an Intro..02br
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00There are thousands of childern in Americaw who are waiting to be adopted. Right now there is a shortage of families and couples who are willing to dopt. However there are gay couple who want to help reduce that that shortage,but face many red flags.Most conservative belive that gay couples should not have the right to ad
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0I was not sure what you ment by this correction (highlighted in pink):02br
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