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Vsuresh Posted 9 years ago
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Garden

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Garden

Garden is a place where there are plants and trees. Usually, there are different varieties of plants in a garden. Garden needs to be well maintained. If not, it does not look good. People spend their leisure time in the garden. Children like to play in the garden as the place is refreshing with a lot of plants around.

  

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vsureshA garden is a place where there are plants and trees.

That's stating the obvious, don't you think. Moreover, trees are a type of plant!

vsureshA garden needs to be well maintained.
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vsureshGarden is a place where there are plants and trees.

A garden is a place where there are plants including trees.


Remember that trees are plants and therefore, the last part needs to be rewritten to reflect that.

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