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Stellayau Posted 21 years ago
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Futher to our telephone convesation yesterday, factory cannot meet the cargo delivery on 10 Jul, due to their China customs handbook problem. The handbook will be finish and ready on 20 Jul, please rearrange the new shipping order for us ASAP.

We will responsible for this late penalty. Sorry for any inconvenience caused
  

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How does this sound: Following up on our telephone conversation of yesterday, let me inform you that the factory cannot meet the cargo delivery scheduled for July 10th, due to a problem with their China customs handbook. The handbook will be finished and ready on July 20th. ] ASAP.

  • How does this sound: Following up on our telephone conversation of yesterday, let me inform you that the factory cannot meet the cargo delivery scheduled for July 10th, due to a problem with their China customs handbook.
  • The handbook will be finished and ready on July 20th.
  • ] ASAP.
  • We will assume responsibility for the late penalty, and are sorry for any inconvenience this has caused.
  • (Today is July 12th.
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How does this sound:

Following up on our telephone conversation of yesterday, let me inform you that the factory cannot meet the cargo delivery scheduled for July 10th, due to a problem with their China customs handbook. The handbook will be finished and ready on July 20th. Please rearrange the delivery of the shipping order [is there an order number?]ASAP.
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Dear Davkett,

Thanks for your nice help

Stella

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