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Hi there
Could you please help me with this long sentence I want to write?
"Prior literature suggests that personality traits and job characteristics of female directors such as commitment to fulfill their responsibilities, a sense of competition against their counterparts (male directors) in the workplace, and a greater presence on the boards have significant effects on the quality of board decision-making and also improve firm performance and shareholders’ satisfaction."
I am worried about how I listed personality traits and job characteristics of female directors
How does the whole sentence seem to you?
thank you in advance.
Top answer
This could be sharpened. But I would begin by breaking the sentence in half in order to make it more readable. For instance: Prior literature suggests that certain personality traits and job characteristics of female directors have significant positive effects on the quality of board decision-making, on and also improve firm performance, and on shareholders’ satisfaction.
- This could be sharpened.
- But I would begin by breaking the sentence in half in order to make it more readable.
- For instance: Prior literature suggests that certain personality traits and job characteristics of female directors have significant positive effects on the quality of board decision-making, on and also improve firm performance, and on shareholders’ satisfaction.
- These characteristics include a strong commitment to fulfill ing their responsibilities, a sense of competition against their male counterparts (male directors) in the workplace, and a greater presence on the governing boards.
- " Do you mean a higher percentage of females on the board?
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This could be sharpened. But I would begin by breaking the sentence in half in order to make it more readable. For instance:
Prior literature suggests that certain personality traits and job characteristics of female directors have significant positive effects on the quality of board decision-making, on and also improve firm performance, and on sh
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