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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
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Future school
I am trying to explain what will happen in the future and if you see any mistakes can I have your comments? Thanks in advance.
In the future, , studnets wil no loger learn history through the textbook. With the help of advanced computer technology, they will be able to visit the simulated world in the past. For example, they can visit the market in England in the 17th and actually see and buy something.
In the future, , studnets wil no loger learn history through the textbook. With the help of advanced computer technology, they will be able to visit the simulated world in the past. For example, they can visit the market in England in the 17th and actually see and buy something.
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Please proofread your posts before you post, sun. My first 4 corrections are for merely typing errors. In the future, students will no longer learn history through textbooks.
- Please proofread your posts before you post, sun.
- My first 4 corrections are for merely typing errors.
- In the future, students will no longer learn history through textbooks.
- With the help of advanced computer technology, they will be able to visit a simulated world of the past.
- For example, they will be able to visit a market in 17th century England and virtually browse and make purchases.
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Please proofread your posts before you post, sun. My first 4 corrections are for merely typing errors.
In the future, students will no longer learn history through textbooks. With the help of advanced computer technology, they will be able to visit a simulated world of the past. For example, they will be able to visit a
In the future, students will no longer learn history through textbooks. With the help of advanced computer technology, they will be able to visit a simulated world of the past. For example, they will be able to visit a
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