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Antonija Posted 12 years ago
Vocabulary
Future prospects
Hello,
I am writing an intent letter for possible collaboration between the two firms.
This is how I end the letter. I am not satisfied with how it sounds and I wonder if native speakers and other fellow teachers can help me make it more elegant and business like.
It would be our pleasure to host you so we can both consider our future prospects for potential cooperation
I thank you in advance.
Best wishes
Antonija
I am writing an intent letter for possible collaboration between the two firms.
This is how I end the letter. I am not satisfied with how it sounds and I wonder if native speakers and other fellow teachers can help me make it more elegant and business like.
It would be our pleasure to host you so we can both consider our future prospects for potential cooperation
I thank you in advance.
Best wishes
Antonija
Top answer
It is already too 'businesslike'—which usually sounds more standoffish and colder than its writers think. It just needs tightening: It would be our pleasure to host you to discuss our prospects for cooperation.
- It is already too 'businesslike'—which usually sounds more standoffish and colder than its writers think.
- It just needs tightening: It would be our pleasure to host you to discuss our prospects for cooperation.
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It is already too 'businesslike'—which usually sounds more standoffish and colder than its writers think. It just needs tightening:
It would be our pleasure to host you to discuss our prospects for cooperation.
It would be our pleasure to host you to discuss our prospects for cooperation.
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