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Future islands
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In the future , the sea level will have risen dramatically , so many islands will have been submerged underwater. Therefore, people who have lost their island will have to move to other countries.
In the future , the sea level will have risen dramatically , so many islands will have been submerged underwater. Therefore, people who have lost their island will have to move to other countries.
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Hi, In the future , the sea level will have risen dramatically , so many islands will have been submerged underwater. Therefore, people who have lost their island will have to move to other countries. It's OK.
- Hi, In the future , the sea level will have risen dramatically , so many islands will have been submerged underwater.
- Therefore, people who have lost their island will have to move to other countries.
- It's OK.
- Do you really need to say 'underwater'?
- I prefer 'island s' .
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Hi,
In the future , the sea level will have risen dramatically , so many islands will have been submerged underwater. Therefore, people who have lost their island will have to move to other countries.
It's OK.
Do you really need to say 'underwater'?
I prefer 'islands'.
You seem to think that you miust leave your country if you leave your
In the future , the sea level will have risen dramatically , so many islands will have been submerged underwater. Therefore, people who have lost their island will have to move to other countries.
It's OK.
Do you really need to say 'underwater'?
I prefer 'islands'.
You seem to think that you miust leave your country if you leave your
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