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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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future career
Hi,
Can you check my sentences, please?
When planning my future career in Germany I have been thinking about working in a lower school. Therefore your advirtesement for the position of Learning Support Teacher really caught my eye.
Thank you a lot!
Can you check my sentences, please?
When planning my future career in Germany I have been thinking about working in a lower school. Therefore your advirtesement for the position of Learning Support Teacher really caught my eye.
Thank you a lot!
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Very good. I'd just substitute While for When. A comma after Germany would be good.
- Very good.
- I'd just substitute While for When.
- A comma after Germany would be good.
- Make sure to spell advertisement correctly.
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I'd just substituteWhile for When.
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