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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Further ahead

I was driving through the parking lot when I suddenly noticed something crash to the ground further ahead. As I got closer I could see that it was a bird which appeared to be dead.

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I was driving through the parking lot when I suddenly noticed something crash to the ground further ahead. As I got closer , I could see that it was a bird which appeared to be dead.

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  • I was driving through the parking lot when I suddenly noticed something crash to the ground further ahead.
  • As I got closer , I could see that it was a bird which appeared to be dead.
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I was driving through the parking lot when I suddenly noticed something crash to the ground further ahead. As I got closer, I could see that it was a bird which appeared to be dead.

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I was driving through the parking lot when I saw something fall to the ground up ahead. As I got closer I could see it was a bird that appeared to be dead.

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