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Victo Posted 13 years ago
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Which is preferred in each set below, #1 or #2?


Set 1

1. The baby weighed eight pounds five ounces.

2. The baby weighed eight pounds, five ounces.


Set 2

1. an eight-pound-five-ounce baby

2. an eight-pound, five-ounce baby


Set 3

1. Joe is six feet four inches tall.

2. Joe is six feet, four inches tall.


Set 4

1. a six-foot-four-inch man

2. a six-foot, four-inch man


Thank you.
  

Top answer

I prefer #1 in every example below, do you?

  • I prefer #1 in every example below, do you?
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12 Answers
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I prefer #1 in every example below, do you?
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C’mon. Don't be shy with this one. ;-)

My assessment here is that a comma should never separate units (i.e. pounds from ounces, feet from inches) within a single measurement.

#1, then, okay in all?

The Chicago Manual of Style doesn't address these.
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Does anybody have the unmitigated temerity to opine here? LOL! :-)
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I did a Bing search to see if there was an authoritative source to answer this and found that you asked this question on this forum back in June 2010. You are now the authoritative source, I guess.
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I did? Can't remember, though. I guess I'll do a Bing search now!
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Thanks, Blue Jay. Albeit an issue of style, Painless Grammar used these examples:


Her baby is a beautiful seven-pound, ten-ounce boy.

Or:


Her baby is a beautiful 7-pound, 10-ounce boy.


What does everybody think of eliminating the comma? Instead of a seven-pound, ten-ounce boy, how about a seven-pound ten-ounce boy
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Aspara Gus,

Do you personally support a 7-pound 10-ounce boy and a 5-foot 10-inch man (minus the commas and three hyphens)? Or would you opt for three ugly hyphens, as in a 7-pound-10-ounce boy and a 5-foot-10-inch man?
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Really interested in your spin on this one. The Chicago Manual of Style uses 5 feet 4 inches (no commas) as an example, but that's all they proffer. That said, based on logic, I'd say that the adjectival variants would be punctuated thusly:

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a 7-pound 10-ounce baby

OR: a 7-pound-10-ounce baby


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