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Contiluo Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Full moon

How can I make the sentences below sound natural?

There are many holidays each year, like Chinese New Year, Dragon Boat Festival and Christmas. But my favorite holiday is a festival on the eighth full moon on lunar year. Do you know what it is? It’s Moon Festival.

  

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Largely this is OK. The only part that is definitely wrong is " on lunar year ". I would suggest a couple of other changes too: There are many holidays each year, such as Chinese New Year, the Dragon Boat Festival and Christmas.

  • Largely this is OK.
  • The only part that is definitely wrong is " on lunar year ".
  • I would suggest a couple of other changes too: There are many holidays each year, such as Chinese New Year, the Dragon Boat Festival and Christmas.
  • But my favorite holiday is a festival on the eighth full moon of the lunar year.
  • Do you know what it is called ?
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Largely this is OK. The only part that is definitely wrong is "on lunar year". I would suggest a couple of other changes too:

There are many holidays each year, such as Chinese New Year, the Dragon Boat Festival and Christmas. But my favorite holiday is a festival on the eighth full

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