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0 01 u 01 font 02 br
02 br
00 Anti- Obsessive Love 02 br
02 br
00 In the ocean of your eyes, 02 br
00 I'd have liked to drown voluntarily. 02 br
00 Everytime I looked at you 02 br
00 I seemed to have drowned even deeper and deeper. 02 br
00 I might had ever reached the bottom of your heart? 02 br
00 I might..... 02 br
00 When you looked into my eyes you saw 02 br
00 my ocean full of raspacious manic love for you... 02 br
02 br
00 Desolated streets, greyish sky 02 br
00 limitless silence and the unbearable agony 02 br
00 which reminds me of the abandoning fact 02 br
00 you were to be the light of my life 02 br
00 to which I wanted to give all my love. 02 br
00 Innocent tears of obsessive love, the dangerous kind 02 br
00 desired to that one look of you which 02 br
00 couldn't express: 01 i 00 I love you 02 i 02 br
02 br
00 There falls a dark shadow 02 br
00 on the light of a sunny day. 02 br
00 There comes a wave 02 br
00 of sadness and takes all my happiness away. 02 br
00 I see the leaves fly away dreary, 02 br
00 Even the breeze 02 br
00 doesn't give me any message. 02 br
00 No one thinking of me. 02 br
00 She didn't abandon me out of her life. 02 br
00 I was just never present in it. 02 br
00 That's how my life ends like a dark shadow 02 br
00 Falling on the light of a sunny day. 02 br
02 br
00 Alphabetically that was what would have supposed to happen, right? 02 br
00 Being obsessively in love, the dangerous kind, which once is tasted will 02 br
00 haunt you forever, all-consuming and ends in tears and everlasting misery. 02 br
02 br
00 I passed over that part, rewriting my story with a happy end and a 02 br
00 life lesson to be learned: You don't need to be in love to be happy. 02 br
00 I'm not and surviving perfectly. 02 br
02 br
01 u 01 font 00 Written by Faisal Syed V3B 02 font 00 02 u 02 br
02 font 02 u 0-
02 br
00 Anti- Obsessive Love 02 br
02 br
00 In the ocean of your eyes, 02 br
00 I'd have liked to drown voluntarily. 02 br
00 Everytime I looked at you 02 br
00 I seemed to have drowned even deeper and deeper. 02 br
00 I might had ever reached the bottom of your heart? 02 br
00 I might..... 02 br
00 When you looked into my eyes you saw 02 br
00 my ocean full of raspacious manic love for you... 02 br
02 br
00 Desolated streets, greyish sky 02 br
00 limitless silence and the unbearable agony 02 br
00 which reminds me of the abandoning fact 02 br
00 you were to be the light of my life 02 br
00 to which I wanted to give all my love. 02 br
00 Innocent tears of obsessive love, the dangerous kind 02 br
00 desired to that one look of you which 02 br
00 couldn't express: 01 i 00 I love you 02 i 02 br
02 br
00 There falls a dark shadow 02 br
00 on the light of a sunny day. 02 br
00 There comes a wave 02 br
00 of sadness and takes all my happiness away. 02 br
00 I see the leaves fly away dreary, 02 br
00 Even the breeze 02 br
00 doesn't give me any message. 02 br
00 No one thinking of me. 02 br
00 She didn't abandon me out of her life. 02 br
00 I was just never present in it. 02 br
00 That's how my life ends like a dark shadow 02 br
00 Falling on the light of a sunny day. 02 br
02 br
00 Alphabetically that was what would have supposed to happen, right? 02 br
00 Being obsessively in love, the dangerous kind, which once is tasted will 02 br
00 haunt you forever, all-consuming and ends in tears and everlasting misery. 02 br
02 br
00 I passed over that part, rewriting my story with a happy end and a 02 br
00 life lesson to be learned: You don't need to be in love to be happy. 02 br
00 I'm not and surviving perfectly. 02 br
02 br
01 u 01 font 00 Written by Faisal Syed V3B 02 font 00 02 u 02 br
02 font 02 u 0-
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