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Mr. Tom Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

froth rushed up and outside the bottle, running all over his hand.

Hi

Do you find the underlined part natural, especially the use of "rushed up and out"? Somehow I feel that the whole sentence needs a major surgery. Any suggestions are welcome.

He shook the Coca-Cola bottle vigorously before flicking it open -- the froth rushed up and outside the bottle, running all over his hand.

Thanks,

Tom
  

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He shook the Coca-Cola bottle vigorously before flicking it open—and the foam gushed out of the bottle and all over his hand.

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He shook the Coca-Cola bottle vigorously before flicking it open—and the foam gushed out of the bottle and all over his hand.
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Many thanks, MM!

I checked in some of my dictionaries -- isn't froth the same as foam? Or is there some difference?

Tom
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'foam' strikes me as thicker than 'froth'. 'froth' strikes me as more superficial than 'foam'. This is just my own subjective feeling about it.

CJ
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Thanks, Clive.

So it means that what forms on coffee is foam (generally thicker) for you, and what forms on a fizzy drink (Coca-Cola, etc) is froth (generally superficial) for you. Right?

Tom
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Mr. TomSo it means that what forms on coffee is foam (generally thicker) for you, and what forms on a fizzy drink (Coca-Cola, etc) is froth (generally superficial) for you. Right?
I don't recall giving any opinion about coffee or soft drinks, and I'm not Clive.

The coffee I drink has no foam or froth. I'd say that a shaken soft drink produces foam, b

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