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Son James Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Front weel didn't move???

Today I talked to my wife like this. But I think there have been a lot of wrong sentences. Could you correct them below for me?

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[1] From near the Now-Zone, suddenly my scooter didn't move.
(The Now-Zone is the building's name)
[2] I started my scooter and lights on so batteries are okay.
[3] but the front wheel didn't move.
[4] It looks my scooter becomes a big stone. So heavy!
[5] Pushing my scooter is so difficult now.

Thank you in advance for your teaching.
  

Top answer

Near the Now-Zone, suddenly my scooter stopped. I started it again, and the lights went on, so the batteries were okay, but the front wheel didn't move. My scooter has become a big, heavy stone, and pushing it was very difficult.

  • Near the Now-Zone, suddenly my scooter stopped.
  • I started it again, and the lights went on, so the batteries were okay, but the front wheel didn't move.
  • My scooter has become a big, heavy stone, and pushing it was very difficult.
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Near the Now-Zone, suddenly my scooter stopped. I started it again, and the lights went on, so the batteries were okay, but the front wheel didn't move. My scooter has become a big, heavy stone, and pushing it was very difficult.
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Thank you so much for your teaching,Mr MicawberEmotion: embarrassed

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