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English 1b3 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

From which

We have taken the time to review your details and have compared them to what the client specifically requires for this role and the other jobs we are currently advertising, from which you have been successful to go through to the next stage.

Should it be 'for' or is 'from'correct?

Thanks
  

Top answer

Neither works; the pronoun's reference is unclear. Shortening the babble will help (but not enough). I hope you were not responsible for all that verbal diarrhea.

— Mister Micawber

  • Neither works; the pronoun's reference is unclear.
  • Shortening the babble will help (but not enough).
  • I hope you were not responsible for all that verbal diarrhea.
  • We have reviewed your details and compared them to the client's current job requirements, and you have successfully advanced to the next stage.
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Neither works; the pronoun's reference is unclear. Shortening the babble will help (but not enough). I hope you were not responsible for all that verbal diarrhea.

We have reviewed your details and compared them to the client's current job requirements, and you have successfully advanced to the next stage.
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Not my writing. What would be the correct preposition if the pronoun had a clear antecedent?

Your version is succinct and clear.
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Our initial CV review is complete, from which you have successfully advanced to the next stage.
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of seems to work just as well, if not better. Am I wrong?
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Wrong, I think. 'Of' does not work in my sentence at all.
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If you re-order the relative clause in normal SV order, it seems to make sense with of, correct?

Our initial CV review is complete, from which (our initial CV review) you have successfully advanced to the next stage.


...you have successfully advanced to the next stage of/from our initial CV review.
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No, not at all. 'You have advanced from our interview'
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Doesn't it depend?

advanced from our interview

advanced to the next stage of our interview.
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My sentence includes both:

Our initial CV review is complete, from which you have successfully advanced to the next stage.

Would you have two 'to's?
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I have re-read the sentence and realize I am wrong, again.

There is no next stage in the initial CV review of course.

Thank you
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