From two other joint bids including one...
Spanish Football Federation said the bid is now better than before.
The partners are likely to face competition from two other joint bids including one from Uruguay, Argentina, Paraguay, and Chile. And another from Egypt, Greece, and Saudi Arabia.
I feel like there should be a comma before including to make sense as an additional information like two other joint bids, including...
What do you native English speakers think? Thank you so much as usual in advance.
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Hans51 I feel like there should be a comma before including to make sense as an additional information like two other joint bids, including... "Including" does not belong there at all. There are two, and both are named.
- Hans51 I feel like there should be a comma before including to make sense as an additional information like two other joint bids, including...
- "Including" does not belong there at all.
- There are two, and both are named.
- Also, the Federation needs an article, and there is a sentence fragment.
- The Spanish Football Federation said the bid is now better than before.
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Hans51I feel like there should be a comma before including to make sense as an additional information like two other joint bids, including...
"Including" does not belong there at all. There are two, and both are named. Also, the Federation needs an article, and there is a sentence fragment.
The Spanish Football Federation said the bid is now better th
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