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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
From the desk of Muhamamd Khawar.
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00 "I will be highly obliged to you people if you you keep a close eye on this thread of mine. I am interested to make my English better and stylish with an excellent vocabulary. I will right here small paragaraphs sentences and you are requested to give me suggestions over them." 02 br
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00 So will you please improve my above paragraph? 02 br
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00 Looking forward to hearing from you, 02 br
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00 Muhammad Khawar. 0-
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00 "I will be highly obliged to you people if you you keep a close eye on this thread of mine. I am interested to make my English better and stylish with an excellent vocabulary. I will right here small paragaraphs sentences and you are requested to give me suggestions over them." 02 br
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00 So will you please improve my above paragraph? 02 br
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00 Looking forward to hearing from you, 02 br
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00 Muhammad Khawar. 0-
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0 Hello Muhammad - I'm not quite sure what you are asking here. Most of these sentences look fine apart from minor changes (commas are not necessary in most of these unless you turn the sentence round > If you do it, I will be grateful] 02 br
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00 This was a simple condition sentence and I have structured this on these grounds, 02 br
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00 This was a simple condition sentence and I have structured this on these grounds, 02 br
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