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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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From the bottom of my heart
Please check the following paragraph.
First, my teacher was a friendly young lady. She was not serious, but rather kindly and humorous. She never lose her temper at kids and she was a nice teacher. Even if someone didn’t do well on tests or stepped out the lines, she wouldn’t get angry. Instead, she would explain it to us kids patiently. Therefore, I appreciated my teacher from the bottom of my heart. She taught me a lot.
First, my teacher was a friendly young lady. She was not serious, but rather kindly and humorous. She never lose her temper at kids and she was a nice teacher. Even if someone didn’t do well on tests or stepped out the lines, she wouldn’t get angry. Instead, she would explain it to us kids patiently. Therefore, I appreciated my teacher from the bottom of my heart. She taught me a lot.
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I have underlined problems: First, my teacher was a friendly young lady. She was not serious, but rather kindly and humorous. She never lose her temper at kids and she was a nice teacher .
- I have underlined problems: First, my teacher was a friendly young lady.
- She was not serious, but rather kindly and humorous.
- She never lose her temper at kids and she was a nice teacher .
- Even if someone didn’t do well on tests or stepped out the lines , she wouldn’t get angry.
- Instead, she would explain it to us kids patiently.
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I have underlined problems:
First, my teacher was a friendly young lady. She was not serious, but rather kindly and humorous. She never lose her temper at kidsand she was a nice teacher. Even if someone didn’t do well on tests or stepped out the lines, she wouldn’t get angry. Instead, she would explain it to us kids patiently. Therefore, I appre
First, my teacher was a friendly young lady. She was not serious, but rather kindly and humorous. She never lose her temper at kids
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First, my teacher was a friendly young lady. She was not serious, but rather kindly and humorous. She never lost her temper at kids. Even if someone didn’t do well on tests or stepped out the line, she wouldn’t get angry. Instead, she would explain it patiently. Therefore, I appreciated my teacher from the bottom of my heart. She taught me a lot.
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