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Frightening event
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One cold rainy day, I stayed in my grandma’s house to keep her company. Having nothing to occupied, we children felt bored. Therefore, we decided to think of something fun to do. One of my cousins, Frank, suggested playing hide-and-seek. Then we began to play the amusing game. At first, I looked for a place to hide myself. Soon, I found a secret closet which was hard to notice to conceal. After a long time, no one detected where I hid. I felt pleased that I would be the winner of this game but didn’t show it. At this moment , when I was trying to open the door to get out of the closet, the door was stuck. I was locked inside the closet. The air inside was tight so I stated to yell out for help. Fortunately, my brother heard my voice and traced to get me out of the closet. After this unexpected, frightening event happened, I believed that it was an awful experience for me. I won't forget it any more.
One cold rainy day, I stayed in my grandma’s house to keep her company. Having nothing to occupied, we children felt bored. Therefore, we decided to think of something fun to do. One of my cousins, Frank, suggested playing hide-and-seek. Then we began to play the amusing game. At first, I looked for a place to hide myself. Soon, I found a secret closet which was hard to notice to conceal. After a long time, no one detected where I hid. I felt pleased that I would be the winner of this game but didn’t show it. At this moment , when I was trying to open the door to get out of the closet, the door was stuck. I was locked inside the closet. The air inside was tight so I stated to yell out for help. Fortunately, my brother heard my voice and traced to get me out of the closet. After this unexpected, frightening event happened, I believed that it was an awful experience for me. I won't forget it any more.
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One cold rainy day, I stayed in my grandma’s house to keep her company. Having nothing to occupied , we children felt bored. Therefore, we decided to think of something fun to do.
- One cold rainy day, I stayed in my grandma’s house to keep her company.
- Having nothing to occupied , we children felt bored.
- Therefore, we decided to think of something fun to do.
- One of my cousins, Frank, suggested playing hide-and-seek.
- Then we began to play the amusing game.
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One cold rainy day, I stayed in my grandma’s house to keep her company. Having nothing to occupied, we children felt bored. Therefore, we decided to think of something fun to do. One of my cousins, Frank, suggested playing hide-and-seek. Then we began to play the amusing game. At first, I looked for a place to hide myself. Soon, I found a secret closet which was hard to notice to
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One cold rainy day, I stayed at my grandma’s house to keep her company. Having nothing to occupy, we children felt bored. Therefore, we decided to think of something fun to do. One of my cousins, Frank, suggested playing hide-and-seek. Then we began to play the amusing game. At first, I looked for a place to hide myself. Soon, I found a secret closet which was hard to be noticed t
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Having nothing to do, we children felt bored.
Soon, I found a secret closet to conceal myself in.
I felt pleased that I would be the winner of this game but didn’t reveal myself.
The air inside was thin so I started yelling out for help.
Fortunately, my brother heard my voice and followed it to get me out of the closet. It was an awful expe
Soon, I found a secret closet to conceal myself in.
I felt pleased that I would be the winner of this game but didn’t reveal myself.
The air inside was thin so I started yelling out for help.
Fortunately, my brother heard my voice and followed it to get me out of the closet. It was an awful expe
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