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MAJAVAN Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Friendship
I've just written a text about friendship, I hope it will interrest you !
Could someone correct me ?
That's the first time I do this lol !
here is my text :
After he's read my blog, a friend of mine told me that I was too proud to ask someone to be my friend.
It made me thinking about it.
I think it depends on how is your consciousness. Indeed, you don't have to have a fixed idea like it was a rule that you impose to yourself.
That's what we call the mind, the intellect.
But that's not it who has to decide what to do.
To me, our consciousness is changing all the time and that's how it makes you change your idea, your opinion. And above all, that's how it makes you doing one thing especially.
We are not a computer, we are human beings.
So that's why sometimes I'd like to ask someone to be my friend while sometimes I prefer observing him or her because I don't want to influence him or her.
I don't waste my time thinking too much about it because I don't want to be a mental man, my heart tells me what to do on the fly and my body acts.
I don't really have rules to apply, I am what I am and I do what I do. And... I've got friends that I've got.
I know human beings are all sick and I'm one of them. So all that you do is determined on what you are deeply in yourself.
Most relationships are based on this fact. Human relationships are social and energizing interaction between various inbalances like hang ups. Indeed, in our world, in our society, it is very difficult to grow completely in harmony.
So, sometimes you make a mistake and you wonder if that was your fault because it aches you deeply in your heart and in your soul and in your friend's soul too.
You wonder if you'd better try to rectify the situation or if you'd rather take the consequences...
And why not both them ?
I think it's a good idea.
Furthermore, a relationship like this is an interesting relationship who enables you to know more about yourself and about your friend if you don't judge yourself or your friend, especially when there are misunderstandings that makes the problem bigger and bigger.
After all, wisdom grows when we accept to work the problems who goes in for you.
Let's be hopeful but not without taking the consequences.
A lot a patience will be required, but isn't worth it ?
Could someone correct me ?
That's the first time I do this lol !
here is my text :
After he's read my blog, a friend of mine told me that I was too proud to ask someone to be my friend.
It made me thinking about it.
I think it depends on how is your consciousness. Indeed, you don't have to have a fixed idea like it was a rule that you impose to yourself.
That's what we call the mind, the intellect.
But that's not it who has to decide what to do.
To me, our consciousness is changing all the time and that's how it makes you change your idea, your opinion. And above all, that's how it makes you doing one thing especially.
We are not a computer, we are human beings.
So that's why sometimes I'd like to ask someone to be my friend while sometimes I prefer observing him or her because I don't want to influence him or her.
I don't waste my time thinking too much about it because I don't want to be a mental man, my heart tells me what to do on the fly and my body acts.
I don't really have rules to apply, I am what I am and I do what I do. And... I've got friends that I've got.
I know human beings are all sick and I'm one of them. So all that you do is determined on what you are deeply in yourself.
Most relationships are based on this fact. Human relationships are social and energizing interaction between various inbalances like hang ups. Indeed, in our world, in our society, it is very difficult to grow completely in harmony.
So, sometimes you make a mistake and you wonder if that was your fault because it aches you deeply in your heart and in your soul and in your friend's soul too.
You wonder if you'd better try to rectify the situation or if you'd rather take the consequences...
And why not both them ?
I think it's a good idea.
Furthermore, a relationship like this is an interesting relationship who enables you to know more about yourself and about your friend if you don't judge yourself or your friend, especially when there are misunderstandings that makes the problem bigger and bigger.
After all, wisdom grows when we accept to work the problems who goes in for you.
Let's be hopeful but not without taking the consequences.
A lot a patience will be required, but isn't worth it ?
Top answer
After he's read my blog, a friend of mine told me that I was too proud to ask someone to be my friend. It made me thinking about it. I think it depends on how is your consciousness.
- After he's read my blog, a friend of mine told me that I was too proud to ask someone to be my friend.
- It made me thinking about it.
- I think it depends on how is your consciousness.
- Indeed, you don't have to have a fixed idea like it was a rule that you impose to yourself.
- That's what we call the mind, the intellect.
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After he's read my blog, a friend of mine told me that I was too proud to ask someone to be my friend.
It made me thinking about it.
I think it depends on how is your consciousness. Indeed, you don't have to have a fixed idea like it was a rule that you impose to yourself.
That's what we call the mind, the intellect.
But that's not it who has to d
It made me thinking about it.
I think it depends on how is your consciousness. Indeed, you don't have to have a fixed idea like it was a rule that you impose to yourself.
That's what we call the mind, the intellect.
But that's not it who has to d
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*After a friend of mine read my blog, he said...
*no ache yes hurt:D
*So all that you do is determined on what you are deeply in yourself. (I don't see the error, sorry) I ^read this sentence again and again but I can't understand it very well. Maybe it is something philosopical too.
*no ache yes hurt:D
*So all that you do is determined on what you are deeply in yourself. (I don't see the error, sorry) I ^read this sentence again and again but I can't understand it very well. Maybe it is something philosopical too.
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yes it is rather philosophical lool
You've helped me so nicely, I thank you very much !
thank you Doll !!!
You've helped me so nicely, I thank you very much !
thank you Doll !!!
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