Friendship

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hi i'm trying to improve my english language and the best way as i think is to write a lot in english.so i will write here an article about friendship and i hope u give me ur comments .

friendship is not just a word , it is have a great meaning . the freandship meaning is like any other thing changed by time and accourding to several factors . in the past u can find that the friend was always with u in all situations the bad and the good one . but now adays u can only find ur friend beside you in the good situations and if u have any problem you look for him u find him escape away from you.

i hope u give me ur comments soon .

MountainHiker · Accepted Answer

Hi Paradisse,

Welcome to the writing section.

Please use proper punctuation, including capitalizing the first letter of the first word in a sentence. Also, "u" is properly spelled "you", and "ur" is properly spelled "your".

friendship is not just a word , it is have a great meaning . the freandship meaning is like any other thing changed by time and accourding to several factors . in the past u can find that the friend was always with u in all situations the bad and the good one . but now adays u can only find ur friend beside you in the good situations and if u have any problem you look for him u find him escape away from you.

Some minor edits.

Friendship is not just a word, it is has great meaning [you need to fix your sentence]. The friendship meaning is like any other thing changed by time and other factors. In the past you can find that the friend was always with you in all situations, both good and bad. But nowadays you can only find your friend beside you during the good times and but not during the bad times.

Major edits.

Friendship is not just a word, but rather a feeling of deep commitment towards another individual. However, the word friendship has changed over time and the influence of others general factors that also shape our society.[1] In the past, friends stuck by you during the good and bad times. But today, friends are only fair weather friends. That is, a friend is only your friend when the sun is shining and times are good.

[1] The other factors is a problem because it is just hanging out there. You need to say what those other factors are, otherwise it is like a sore that never heals. It calls attention to itself.

Hope that helps.

MountainHiker

Paradisse · Answer

thank you very much mountainhiker . your comments help me a lot .

but i want to ask a simple question . how can i improve my writing skills ?

MountainHiker · Answer

Hi,

You need to read books, magazines, and newspapers. There are several newspapers that are online and are free. The New York Times, Washington Post, LA Times are just an example of the free newspapers.

MountainHiker

Paradisse · Answer

hi
thank you very much mountain hiker

MountainHiker · Answer

Hi Paradisse,

You are most welcome.

Again, remember when posting messages here in the writing section, or in the grammar section, or anywhere else, please use proper capitalization for sentences.

We native speakers recognize shapes of words and sentences. Surprisingly to some, when the shapes are not displayed properly, we must work harder to understand.

As an example.

PLEASE DON'T WRITE IN ALL CAPS BECAUSE MANY PEOPLE THINK YOU ARE SHOUTING. That is hard for us to read because we don't see the normal shapes of words. Similary:

i dont like when people write everthing in lower case . when the put their periods in funny places i have to look harder to see where one sentence ends and another begins . i find this behavior somewhat rude . sometimes they dont put in the proper apostrophes too which again makes things somewhat harder .

Same thing.

So please make it easier for us to help you.

MountainHiker

Paradisse · Answer

ok mountainhiker
I will try to do my best and follow this rules in my writing .I'm not a native speaker so you have to forgive me .

MountainHiker · Answer

paradisse,

Thank you so much. Sometimes it is the small things that are important!

MountainHiker

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