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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
friends please show to my wrongs :)
arkadaslar yazdigim yazidaki hatalari söyler misiniz ? çook mesut olurum 
.simdiden tesekkürler herkese..
Game addiction
1 This thing a big trouble in our century.absolutely there is addiction some games all of
2 us.example like i do on clash of clans.what can we do for to get rid of it.there is some
3 books about addiction but its not comprehensive.game addiction is the new problem,its
4 release new yet.also most people complaning t othis situation.what is this thing!i dont want
5 to this lo longer.actually this is a mental disorde.we had to play jump rope,nine stone,hide
6 and seek,formerly.but now;not like that at all.there is is computer planing its under the
7 addictions.
8 Why are we be addictions?there is most answer of this ask.generally problem is the
9 inability to control.what is the physical symptoms?
10 the symptomes shows that:
11 -Dryness of the eyes
12 -Sleep disturbonces
13 -Headche
14 -Back and neck pain
.simdiden tesekkürler herkese..Game addiction
1 This thing a big trouble in our century.absolutely there is addiction some games all of
2 us.example like i do on clash of clans.what can we do for to get rid of it.there is some
3 books about addiction but its not comprehensive.game addiction is the new problem,its
4 release new yet.also most people complaning t othis situation.what is this thing!i dont want
5 to this lo longer.actually this is a mental disorde.we had to play jump rope,nine stone,hide
6 and seek,formerly.but now;not like that at all.there is is computer planing its under the
7 addictions.
8 Why are we be addictions?there is most answer of this ask.generally problem is the
9 inability to control.what is the physical symptoms?
10 the symptomes shows that:
11 -Dryness of the eyes
12 -Sleep disturbonces
13 -Headche
14 -Back and neck pain
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Dear anon; You have many errors. Please fix your writing with these first. B egin each sentence with a CAPITAL letter.
- Dear anon; You have many errors.
- Please fix your writing with these first.
- B egin each sentence with a CAPITAL letter.
- E nd each sentence with a period or question mark.
- W rite only in English.
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Dear anon;
You have many errors. Please fix your writing with these first.
Begin each sentence with a CAPITAL letter.
End each sentence with a period or question mark.
Write only in English.
Always use a capital I for first person.
Use an apostrophe when you abbreviat
You have many errors. Please fix your writing with these first.
Begin each sentence with a CAPITAL letter.
End each sentence with a period or question mark.
Write only in English.
Always use a capital I for first person.
Use an apostrophe when you abbreviat
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