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Contiluo Posted 9 years ago
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Freshman cup

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I was good at playing badminton and was active in student associations in my college life. In 2015, I won champion of Freshman Cup of badminton at NCTU. Earlier in my college life at NTHU, I joined the club of Health Care and Entertainment Guidance, which mainly focus on helping high school students with learning disabilities, and participated in service activities for disadvantaged juveniles. Through these processes of helping others, I gained valuable experiences, such as the spirit of teamwork, the ability of leadership, good managerial skills and organizational capabilities.

  

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I was good at badminton and was active in college student associations. In 2015, I won the badminton Freshman Cup at NCTU. I joined the Health Care and Entertainment Guidance club, which mainly focuses on helping high school students with learning disabilities, and participated in service activities for disadvantaged juveniles.

  • I was good at badminton and was active in college student associations.
  • In 2015, I won the badminton Freshman Cup at NCTU.
  • I joined the Health Care and Entertainment Guidance club, which mainly focuses on helping high school students with learning disabilities, and participated in service activities for disadvantaged juveniles.
  • Through helping others, I gained valuable experience in teamwork, leadership, managerial skills and organizational capabilities.
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I was good at badminton and was active in college student associations. In 2015, I won the badminton Freshman Cup at NCTU. I joined the Health Care and Entertainment Guidance club, which mainly focuses on helping high school students with learning disabilities, and participated in service activities for disadvantaged juveniles. Through helping others, I gained valuable experience in teamwor

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