Free writing. Could you please help me correct all my grammars, structures and so on. Thank you very much.

This essay is just for practising to improve my writing skill. Could you please correct my grammars, structures and so on. Thank you so much.

Essay

Learning, a word that is very easy to understand because each of us is and has been learning but to

understand the real meaning of learning, it’s another story. Learning is very familiar to everyone, we can

see many parents force their children to go to school and hope in the future they can make money. So

what is learning? why learning is so meaningful? Well, like other kids, I were expected to study well

when I was young so that I could go to university, had a seat at a good company with a steady salary and

lived a normal life but every day behold the youth can’t find out the beauty of knowledge, underrated

the education, don’t understand their responsibilities to their country, their family and themselves,

some children want to go to school but they have a financial burden that prevents their chances to be

successful and seeing society out there is full of injustice, dolorous and despair makes my heartbroken,

I’m thinking a lot about I want to do something to fix this situation, I want everyone to know that we

learning not to make money or because our parents tell us to learn, we learn so that we can find out

who we are, to gain a fascinating insight into our civilization, how diverse and colourful the world is and

learn how to love yourself, to nurture our soul. That the reasons promote me to be a teacher, I want to

complete my knowledge, get a passionate and dedicated Finnish’s education, have the opportunity to

change the future, the world. I believe if we recognize the large value that learning brings, the world will

be better.