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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago

Free verse poem help

Hey I need help writing a free verse poem.. I have to write it about myself I just don't know where to start..
  

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Start with 'I' then. We don't write poetry for you, but we will check your grammar if you post one you've written.

  • Start with 'I' then.
  • We don't write poetry for you, but we will check your grammar if you post one you've written.
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Start with 'I' then. We don't write poetry for you, but we will check your grammar if you post one you've written.
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Flying through the clear blue sky
I get a feeling that gives me joy inside
Seeing the seasons change as the years go by
I see how nothing stays the same
Friends may come and go but family will stay forever
Having no restrictions or problems of any kind I see
life from a different side
Fighting and worrying were once my way
But now I see it another way
Flapping
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It's a good start. It's not necessarily a matter of adding more (as a matter of fact, revision is generally an elimination of unnecessary words, especially with poetry), but it needs to focus more. The connection between flying and the thoughts is not clear: why is the person flying? Why is it not what the person really wants perhaps? These points need to be made clear.

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