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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
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free soup

Could you please check if the following sentences are natural?
Stay at us and get a free soup!!
The hotel provides an authentic Korean restaurant on the third floor.
For dinner time on weekdays and lunch time on weekends, their original soup will be offered for free to guests staying at the hotel.
  

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Stay with us and get free soup! The hotel provides an authentic Korean restaurant on the third floor. With dinner on weekdays and lunch on weekends, soup made from an original recipe will be offered free to hotel guests.

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  • Stay with us and get free soup!
  • The hotel provides an authentic Korean restaurant on the third floor.
  • With dinner on weekdays and lunch on weekends, soup made from an original recipe will be offered free to hotel guests.
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Stay with us and get free soup!
The hotel provides an authentic Korean restaurant on the third floor.
With dinner on weekdays and lunch on weekends, soup made from an original recipe will be offered free to hotel guests.
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Thank you very much for your feedback.
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You might say 'is' instead of 'will be'.
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moguwai007their original soup will be offered
This sounds like they are still serving the same pot of soup they made when they first started the restaurant.
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