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0 I have half a title and a few old rhymes here, which I don't really need any more. If anyone would like to take them and turn them into a poem, please feel free.  02br02br00Only one proviso: you must leave another set of rhymes for someone else to use. 02br02hr02br02br00...IN C# MINOR 02br02br00...egg, 02br00...palindrome. 02br00...leg? 02br00...home. 02br02br00...potato! 02br00...plinth: 02br00...staccato 02br00...synth- 02br02br00...jack; 02br00...Zéphirine 02br00...clack-clack 02br00...poteen. 02br02br00...choose? 02br00...Monroe, 02br00...enthuse 02br00...so! 02br02br00...the 02br00...a 02br00...to B – 02br00...au lait! 02br02hr02br02br00Good luck... 02br02br00MrP 0-

Anita_a · Accepted Answer

0Maybe we should have something simpler first Mr.P ! 05000 BTW, what does synth and poteen mean?010id1

MrPedantic · Answer

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00I think you're right! 02br
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00Poteen is an illicit Irish liquor, made out of potatoes. Synth- is half of: synthesis, synthesiser, etc. 02br
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00I'll try again... 02br
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00MrP 010id1

MrPedantic · Answer

0 ...FIRE 02br
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00...air 02br
00...marches. 02br
00...pair, 02br
00...arches. 02br
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00...friend 02br
00...dust, 02br
00...spend 02br
00...must. 02br
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00...breaks 02br
00...again! 02br
00...shakes 02br
00...rain. 02br
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00...day, 02br
00...anticipate 02br
00...may 02br
00...date. 02br
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00...gone? 02br
00...dark: 02br
00...shone 02br
00...spark. 02br
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00...strong, 02br
00...flame 02br
00...song 02br
00...same. 02br
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00You can take only one or two sets of four, if you like; or you can mix them with 4 from the earlier post. 02br
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00But don't forget, you have to contribute as many as you use in another post, for the next person! 02br
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00MrP 0-

Guest · Answer

0 Zéphirine in C minor 02br
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00He was eating his egg 02br
00Writing a palindrome. 02br
00Was he pulling my leg? 02br
00That's not what I call home! 02br
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00Go 'way, fat potato! 02br
00And let me dust the plinth 02br
00My words rose staccato 02br
00Was no need for a synth. 02br
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00He was a lumberjack 02br
00He called me Zéphirine 02br
00And when we made crac crac 02br
00We drank lots of posteen. 02br
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00Were it for me to choose, 02br
00I'd be Mar'lyn Monroe 02br
00So that he could enthuse 02br
00And really love me so. 02br
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00Oh I so miss his "the", 02br
00And I crave for his "a" 02br
00And now I long to B 02br
00Ce soir enfin au lit. 0-

Guest · Answer

0 Replacement rhymes: 02br
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00- codex 02br
00- bode 02br
00-*** 02br
00-road 02br
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00- knife 02br
00- teck 02br
00- life 02br
00- mec 02br
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00- aye 02br
00- syringe 02br
00- ail 02br
00- fringe 02br
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00- pat 02br
00- dog 02br
00- sat 02br
00- log 0-

Anita_a · Answer

0 She walked to see her love and friend 02br
00who was now resting in the dust, 02br
00She remembered all the time they spend 02br
00and her grieving seemed so a must. 02br
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00The sorrow and pain in heart breaks 02br
00for she will never see her again! 02br
00Her lips tremble and her hand shakes 02br
00when she recalls blood flowing like the rain. 02br
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00It was her relationship’s doom’s day, 02br
00No one could ever anticipate. 02br
00Blood rains in the month of May 02br
00when she saw her with another date. 02br
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00Was all the love they had gone? 02br
00the kissing and loving in the dark: 02br
00The flash on them when had shone 02br
00the heart in her gave a spark. 02br
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00She tried her best to be strong, 02br
00but what she had seen lit a flame. 02br
00So she had to sing her the death song, 02br
00but life without her would never be the same. 0-

Anita_a · Answer

0 Some simple replacement rhymes.... 02br
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00**** 02br
00Smell 02br
00Trust 02br
00Dwell 02br
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00Crave 02br
00Merry 02br
00Save 02br
00Ferry 02br
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00All 02br
00Dove 02br
00Small 02br
00Move 02br
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00Fret 02br
00Smile 02br
00Bet 02br
00While 02br
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00Trial 02br
00Heart 02br
00Mile 02br
00Lot 0-

MrPedantic · Answer

0 Hello Anita 02br
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00She remembered all the time they spend ] You would need a past tense here, which spoils the rhyme, unfortunately! 02br
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00and her grieving seemed so a must. ] I wonder whether 'a must' is slightly too slangy. Might be easier to reset the two lines in the present tense. 02br
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00when she recalls blood flowing like the rain. ] > 'like rain' (no need for 'the') 02br
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00Blood rains in the month of May ] This is an interesting line. I like the pun ('reigns'). 02br
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00Was all the love they had gone? 02br
00the kissing and loving in the dark: 02br
00The flash on them when had shone 02br
00the heart in her gave a spark. ] The first two lines of this stanza are fine, but the last 2 don't quite work. 02br
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00So she had to sing her the death song, ] I wonder whether this would read better without either 'her' or 'the'. 02br
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00but life without her would never be the same. ] Is this line a little too long, do you think? 02br
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00It's a pity no one's taken up your set of rhymes. I like merry/ferry. Maybe a Guest will try. 02br
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00MrP 0-

Wistiti · Answer

0 Hi, folks! 02br
00I saw this yesterday, have given it some thought, here's what I came up with, but please don't be too hard on me! (sorry, "dove" and "move" didn't rhyme) 02br
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00Return 02br
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00Gone are the days of **** 02br
00(He got off on my smell). 02br
00He's gone and broke my trust, 02br
00No more does love here dwell. 02br
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00So, now I lie and crave, 02br
00I'm no longer merry; 02br
00I cry and scrounge and save, 02br
00I beg 'long the ferry. 02br
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00Then I'll gather it all 02br
01del~~00I have nothing to prove02del~~02br
00I'll leave my home so small 02br
00And fin'lly to him move. 02br
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00Oh, he will surely fret, 02br
00Won't greet me with a smile, 02br
00But his wide arms I bet 02br
00Will hug me in a while. 02br
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00And should I stand a trial, 02br
00My bail will be my heart. 02br
00Noone within a mile 02br
00Could move me from his lot. 0-

Guest · Answer

0 Oh, so sad, and at the same time so full of hope! 02br
00I like the line with the bail and the heart... 0-

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