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Adriana Posted 23 years ago
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Free Health Care In America.

Many people in America do not have adequate health care benefits. Insurance policies and health care should be provided for the masses free of charge, as it is in some countries. In fact, I agree with this point of view, health care services should be provided at no cost for all the Americans regardless of what their economic position is. Health is a necessity, not a privilege of which only moneyed people can enjoy.
As a first point, doctors have an ethic; such ethic states that they always must help the others, even if those do not have enough economic sources to pay for that services. Those doctors who refuse to take care of individuals in such conditions are violating their own ethic and moreover, their own moral values. Therefore, a good doctor should not matter about if the patient have or not have health care benefits before deciding to attend to that patient or not.
Secondly, by providing free health care services; the number of diseases as malnutrition, diarrhea, influenza, and others similar to the ones mentioned that affect more the humble people would be considerably reduced. Indeed, those services could help to detect and deal with all of those illness that are not treated on time, and that cause many deaths among the lower classes of the society.
  

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I would change 'the Americans' to 'Americans' in the third sentence. There is no need for an article when speaking about a nationality. ' I would change this to read: Therefore, a good doctor should not be concerned whether the patient has or doesn't have health care benefits...

  • I would change 'the Americans' to 'Americans' in the third sentence.
  • There is no need for an article when speaking about a nationality.
  • ' I would change this to read: Therefore, a good doctor should not be concerned whether the patient has or doesn't have health care benefits...
  • 'the number of diseases as' - I would change to: the number of diseases such as...
  • What do you mean exactly when you say....
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I would change 'the Americans' to 'Americans' in the third sentence. There is no need for an article when speaking about a nationality.

'help the others' I would again take the article 'the' away reading 'help others'

'sources' change to 'resources'

'Therefore, a good doctor should not matter about if the patient have or not have health care benefits...' I would c

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