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Scarf navy 96 Posted 8 years ago
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There are many things around can make you “stress” and “Overwhelmed”. It can be exercised which teacher gave for you, long presentations or large projects need to invest much time, or effort and money. However, busy is not always a bad thing, at least it is always right with me. It is difficult to explain I feel myself works good and more effective when I put myself was under stress. That is shown clearly in about time when I studied at University. There are presentations I have to spend a whole week to prepare although not always it as well as you had expected. At the time the results of it do not be calculated, I feel like my effort down the drain. Luckily the negative feeling not haunts me so far before I can forget it. I learn how to look everything in a more gentle, but not as heavy as I used to be, and look at positive aspects of problem happened to me. I learn the way to concentrate on the big picture – final goals, more than the small fails along the road. The knowing clearly what you think to do and what you need to do achieve that things just indeed question you have to find the answer for them.

  

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There are many problems with your writing. I have highlighted some of the areas that need attention. Many of the clauses are not formed correctly.

  • There are many problems with your writing.
  • I have highlighted some of the areas that need attention.
  • Many of the clauses are not formed correctly.
  • There are many things around (missing words) can make you “ stress ” and “Overwhelmed”.
  • It can be exercised which (wrong words) (missing words) teacher gave for yo u, long presentations or large projects need to invest much time, or effort and money.
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There are many problems with your writing. I have highlighted some of the areas that need attention. Many of the clauses are not formed correctly.


There are many things around (missing words) can make you “stress” and “Overwhelmed”. It can be exercised

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