Framing a better sentence
Hi
I have a sentence:
It is not God that had broken covenant with them, they have broken covenant with God.
I know there is a better way of framing this sentence.
Please help.
Thank you.
Note: Both pronouns "them" and "they" refer to "the people of Judah"
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writingtosms I know there is a better way of framing this sentence. I think you're right. The two halves are not parallel, and the tenses are confused.
- writingtosms I know there is a better way of framing this sentence.
- I think you're right.
- The two halves are not parallel, and the tenses are confused.
- There are, of course, a number of ways to put it, and a number of meanings depending on what tenses are there after it's been straightened out.
- " I am of the school that thinks it is not a comma splice if the two halves contradict.
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writingtosmsI know there is a better way of framing this sentence.
I think you're right. The two halves are not parallel, and the tenses are confused. There are, of course, a number of ways to put it, and a number of meanings depending on what tenses are there after it's been straightened out. I don't know who broke what when, but for example,
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