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Zhixitan Posted 19 years ago

Frame of mind...Wind

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00pack off dust, bring back fresh02br
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00pack off miss, bring back hope02br
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00how many dust had lick up truness in heart02br
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00how many miss had take up grievance in heart02br
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00but02br
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00fresh washing up smear, give back puerility02br
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00hope pacify agiony, release true love02br
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00should02br
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00be thankful, be grateful, be appreciate02br
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00towards great wind0-
  

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g. 01i 00smear02i 00 vs 01i 00puerility02i 00). It needs grammar and punctuation checks, like the others.

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  • 01i 00smear02i 00 vs 01i 00puerility02i 00).
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0This one has a bad mismatching of register (e.g. 01i00smear02i00 vs 01i00puerility02i00). It needs grammar and punctuation checks, like the others. Your form and vocabulary is very attractive, but then you repel the reader with the lack of language structure.02br
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Thankyou very much for the comment, teacher.Yes, I know my grammar are awful.Emotion: sadI always wish to improve.Will teacher give any suggestion
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