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Zhixitan Posted 19 years ago

Frame of mind...Split Second

0Split Second02br
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00momentary scald02br
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00shake my soul02br
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00stare fishy at wrist02br
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00turn into reddish from complexion02br
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00heat arouse02br
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00not red pain02br
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00but gray sorrow02br
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00precipitate gray02br
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00heart02br
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00sink down02br
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00and down02br
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00and down02br
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00tears on face02br
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00glide through once path02br
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00wing blow ceaselessly02br
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00yet can't blow away02br
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00that fearful memory0-
  

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0Your work is very interesting, Zhixitan. Omit the two '01i 00and downs02i 00'... 0-

  • 0Your work is very interesting, Zhixitan.
  • Omit the two '01i 00and downs02i 00'...
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0Your work is very interesting, Zhixitan. Omit the two '01i00and downs02i00'... and fix the grammar.0-
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0 DON'T omit the two "and downs" poetry is a matter of opinion.02br
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00I think the third line from the bottom contains two typing errors.0-

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