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Zorina Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Fragments of proposal letters
Here are a few sentences from different business letters. Could you please check if they are grammatically correct and in appropriate register.
Company “Newton” is presenting its duty to you and expressing its interest for your interview in New York Times on 11/20/2008.
If you are interested in our proposal, we are ready to negotiate at your convenience.
We would like to inform you that on 11/20/2008 we sent Mr. Brown an official letter with our proposal regarding internet promotion and information support. Unfortunately, we have not received any answer.
We are hoping for explanation of the situation and will be obliged to you if you invite us to a negotiations for the detailed discussion of the proposal.
Thank you for your help.
Company “Newton” is presenting its duty to you and expressing its interest for your interview in New York Times on 11/20/2008.
If you are interested in our proposal, we are ready to negotiate at your convenience.
We would like to inform you that on 11/20/2008 we sent Mr. Brown an official letter with our proposal regarding internet promotion and information support. Unfortunately, we have not received any answer.
We are hoping for explanation of the situation and will be obliged to you if you invite us to a negotiations for the detailed discussion of the proposal.
Thank you for your help.
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) in the New York Times on November 20, 2008. If you are interested in our proposal, we would be happy to discuss it further at your convenience. On November 20, 2008, we sent Mr.
- ) in the New York Times on November 20, 2008.
- If you are interested in our proposal, we would be happy to discuss it further at your convenience.
- On November 20, 2008, we sent Mr.
- Brown our formal proposal for internet promotion and information support.
- Unfortunately, we have not received a response.
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Newton Company is presenting its duty to you and expressing its interest for your interview (I do not understand the meaning of the underlined.) in the New York Times on November 20, 2008.
If you are interested in our proposal, we would be happy to discuss it further at your convenience.
On November 20, 2008, we sent Mr. Brown o
If you are interested in our proposal, we would be happy to discuss it further at your convenience.
On November 20, 2008, we sent Mr. Brown o
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Thank you, Mister Micawber, for your corrections.
About the first sentence: it was a translation from my language, maybe to literal. Now I’ll try to rephrase it. (In the original text there are some phrases which sound rather old-fashioned to me, so it may be so in the translated text as well.)
Newton Company is paying obeisance to you. We have read
About the first sentence: it was a translation from my language, maybe to literal. Now I’ll try to rephrase it. (In the original text there are some phrases which sound rather old-fashioned to me, so it may be so in the translated text as well.)
Newton Company is paying obeisance to you. We have read
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Not current at all (the first part sounds absolutely feudal!), but I understand it.
We read with great interest your interview in the New York Times on November 20, 2008, and Newton Company would be happy to support your plans. We would like to inform you about our project.
We read with great interest your interview in the New York Times on November 20, 2008, and Newton Company would be happy to support your plans. We would like to inform you about our project.
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