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Christine Christie Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Fragments

1. Are both these fragments in good English:



a) "The policies of the "Human Kinetics" website state:

"WELCOME! IF THIS IS YOUR FIRST TIME PURCHASING ON OUR NEW WEBSITE, YOU MUST CREATE A NEW ACCOUNT. TO EASILY ACCESS DIGITAL PRODUCTS, PLEASE CREATE YOUR NEW ACCOUNT USING THE SAME LOGIN AND PASSWORD AS REGISTERED ON OUR LEGACY WEBSITE."

b) "The policies of the "Human Kinetics" website read:

"WELCOME! IF THIS IS YOUR FIRST TIME PURCHASING ON OUR NEW WEBSITE, YOU MUST CREATE A NEW ACCOUNT. TO EASILY ACCESS DIGITAL PRODUCTS, PLEASE CREATE YOUR NEW ACCOUNT USING THE SAME LOGIN AND PASSWORD AS REGISTERED ON OUR LEGACY WEBSITE." 2. And which sounds better?
  

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I don't like anything posted in all-caps. It is rude. Neither are particularly compelling.

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  • I don't like anything posted in all-caps.
  • It is rude.
  • Neither are particularly compelling.
  • I wouldn't use a site that does not migrate their existing user accounts when they launch a new site.
  • What if I don't have an account on the "legacy website"?
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I don't like anything posted in all-caps. It is rude.

Neither are particularly compelling. I wouldn't use a site that does not migrate their existing user accounts when they launch a new site.

What if I don't have an account on the "legacy website"?

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