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Ana Machado Posted 9 years ago
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"found home (where)" / "come true" / "driven by"

Does the text below make sense to you, and sound ok? Is it grammatically correct? Thank you!

"My love for urban planning found home where futurism meets actual needs. This project is a dream come true that has been sketched and driven by inspiration through many years of research."

  

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Hi Grammatically, it looks OK to me It would be useful to have some context - or even a picture - that would illustrate what the writer means. I googled the sentence verbatim, but I can't find a reference on the web At the outset, futurism was quite closely linked to fascism, violence, the predominance of mechanised transport such as airplanes over cities, motor cars in cities and, in general, urban industrialisation So then I worry about what 'actual needs' means. It doesn't say whose needs or which kinds of needs are being addressed.

— Dave_anon

  • Hi Grammatically, it looks OK to me It would be useful to have some context - or even a picture - that would illustrate what the writer means.
  • I googled the sentence verbatim, but I can't find a reference on the web At the outset, futurism was quite closely linked to fascism, violence, the predominance of mechanised transport such as airplanes over cities, motor cars in cities and, in general, urban industrialisation So then I worry about what 'actual needs' means.
  • It doesn't say whose needs or which kinds of needs are being addressed.
  • The word 'actual' is not doing a great deal of work here.
  • If it means the practical needs of ordinary people, why was that not said?
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Hi

Grammatically, it looks OK to me

It would be useful to have some context - or even a picture - that would illustrate what the writer means. I googled the sentence verbatim, but I can't find a reference on the web

At the outset, futurism was quite closely linked to fascism, violence, the predominance of mechanised transport such as airplanes over cities, motor cars in citie

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