Fornal letter asking for suppliers

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Hi there,

We are looking for suppliers and we like to be their wholesalers or distributors in other countries. I'd like somebody to correct my English writing

. Thanks

this is the letter:
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We are a Venezuelan enterprise------------------- working in the business of Selling and Promotion of specialized medical services for emergency and also in the branch of importing, exporting and distribution of equipment and instrument surgery and all others of medical industry.
We are looking for suppliers which would like to have us as their distributor and wholesalers in the Venezuelan and Caribbean market.
We’d like have your response by email as soon as possible.

Sincerely,
XYZ

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Thanks in Advance
XYZ

MountainHiker · Accepted Answer

Hi Guest,

You live in a beautiful country. I have been to Caracas.

I encourage you to register, though you certainly don't have to.

We are a Venezuelan enterprise------------------- working in the business of Selling and Promotion of specialized medical services for emergency and also in the branch of importing, exporting and distribution of equipment and instrument surgery and all others of medical industry.
We are looking for suppliers which would like to have us as their distributor and wholesalers in the Venezuelan and Caribbean market.
We’d like have your response by email as soon as possible.

We are a Venezuelan company ***. We import, export and distribute all types of medical equipment within the Venezuela and Caribbean market. Our specialization is to promote the use of and sell medical equipment for emergency services.

We are looking for suppliers that are interested in having us as their distributor and wholesaler in the Venezuelan and Caribbean market.

We would welcome the opportunity to discuss your company's plans for the Venezuelan and Caribbean market. You can contact me by e-mail at Email Removed or by phone at 011-58-2-123-4567. If I have not heard from you within a two weeks, I will contact you to see if we can be of further assistance.

Sincerely,
Guest

Your letter is tuned up, but it is likely to fail. I don't know anything about you. You need to convince me that you can accmplish the job, you are honest, trustworthy, you are capable of sellling, you already have a number of clients, you have established relationships with hospitals and on and on.

Good luck.

MountainHiker

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