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Alex722 Posted 8 years ago
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Hello.

Could you please check if the sentence bellow is grammatically correct and feel free to refrase it.

In 2006, Sarah, who had already obtained her bachelor wasn't satisfied with this achievment and applied for a master degree

  

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In 2006, Sarah, who had already obtained her bachelor's degree, wasn't satisfied with this achievement and enrolled for a master's degree.

  • In 2006, Sarah, who had already obtained her bachelor's degree, wasn't satisfied with this achievement and enrolled for a master's degree.
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In 2006, Sarah, who had already obtained her bachelor's degree, wasn't satisfied with this achievement and enrolled for a master's degree.

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