Formal sentence
Hello. Could you please tell me if the following sentences are grammatically correct and polite? I want to ask an eminent professor to edit my paper. I want to submit the paper under his supervision.
"I would appreciate it if you would consider editing the paper. That would be a great honor to prepare the paper under your supervision."
Thank you.
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Wildblue "I would appreciate it if you would consider editing the paper. " As shown above. CJ
- Wildblue "I would appreciate it if you would consider editing the paper.
- " As shown above.
- CJ
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Wildblue"I would appreciate it if you would consider editing the paper.ThatIt would be a great honor to prepare the paper under your supervision."
As shown above.
CJ
0I personally would change it slightly. I don't think it's necessarily wrong, but it weirdly assigns the "honor" to the preparation of the paper, rather than stressing the supervision (which is the real honor). Also, it's usually a little clunky to use the word "paper" in back-to-back sentences. Also, "great" might be overkill. I would write:
I would appreciate it if you would co
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