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Hello666 Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Formal letter-correction?
Hi all,
I would like to ask you for a help with the correction of my formal letter. Any tips are welcomed!
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Dear Mr and Mrs Prendergast,
I am writing with regard to your advertisement which has been published on the website http://www.englishsummerjobs.com/. I was looking for a similar job opportunity, when I have noticed your offer, which made a huge impression on me.
I am an eighteen-year-old student at ????? High School, which is located in Slovakia. Although our primary language in the school has been German I have been learning English for more than 7 years. I have never been to any English speaking country as Great Britain or United States of America nevertheless I am fully interested in improving my language skills abroad.
In the following weeks I should make decision, how I would like to spend my summer holidays. Last year I was working in a company, where I was helping in administration department and this position required my full responsibility and sedulity. I am prepared to use my hard-working ability and I am also prepared to prosper from my last year experience but this time I am looking for a job opportunity in a different section. Your advertisement reports an information about working in a nature on Holiday Farm with included accommodation and English lessons. When I was younger I used to spend my summer holidays at grandmother living in the countryside, therefore I collected enough experience with helping on a little farm.
Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions or any references are required. I would be grateful if you could send me your statement.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
With gratitude,
?????
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Thank you a lot !!! I appreciate it much !
I would like to ask you for a help with the correction of my formal letter. Any tips are welcomed!
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Dear Mr and Mrs Prendergast,
I am writing with regard to your advertisement which has been published on the website http://www.englishsummerjobs.com/. I was looking for a similar job opportunity, when I have noticed your offer, which made a huge impression on me.
I am an eighteen-year-old student at ????? High School, which is located in Slovakia. Although our primary language in the school has been German I have been learning English for more than 7 years. I have never been to any English speaking country as Great Britain or United States of America nevertheless I am fully interested in improving my language skills abroad.
In the following weeks I should make decision, how I would like to spend my summer holidays. Last year I was working in a company, where I was helping in administration department and this position required my full responsibility and sedulity. I am prepared to use my hard-working ability and I am also prepared to prosper from my last year experience but this time I am looking for a job opportunity in a different section. Your advertisement reports an information about working in a nature on Holiday Farm with included accommodation and English lessons. When I was younger I used to spend my summer holidays at grandmother living in the countryside, therefore I collected enough experience with helping on a little farm.
Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions or any references are required. I would be grateful if you could send me your statement.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
With gratitude,
?????
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Thank you a lot !!! I appreciate it much !
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- I was looking for a similar job opportunit y when I have noticed your ad offer, which made a huge impression on me.
- I am an eighteen-year-old high-school student at ?????
- High School, which is located in from Slovakia.
- Although our the primary language in the my school has been is Germa n, I have been learning English for more than 7 years.
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Dear Mr and Mrs Prendergast,
I am writing with regard to your advertisementwhich has been published on the website www.englishsummerjobs.com. I was looking for a similar job opportunity when I have noticed your ad offer, which made a huge impression on me.
I am an eighteen-year-old high-school studentat ?????
I am writing with regard to your advertisement
I am an eighteen-year-old high-school student
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I'd follow that with a paragraph talking about your qualifications (briefly and honestly described). All you want to do in this letter is get someone's attention. Once you have that, you can send them a resume which details your work skills and experience relevant to the job you are applying for.
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I'd follow that with a paragraph talking about your qualifications (briefly and honestly described). All you want to do in this letter is get someone's attention. Once you have that, you can send them a resume which details your work skills and experience relevant to the job you are applying for.
No need
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