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Lukasz Lukasz Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Formal letter - cooperation
Hey guys!
I really would like you to verify this letter. I tried to make it 90% formal.
It is a cooperation request.
XXX Group Ltd. would like to support your corporation in the efficient transport and contribute generating revenue.
We also wanted to clarify that our interest in your company is not accidental. Your unit is certainly one of those where the level of services provided directly shifts into customer satisfaction. It is therefore certainly that we would like to establish cooperation and serve you in the manner you deserve.
Our company offers comprehensive solutions in the logistics of road, sea and air.
For 15 years XXX Group Ltd. uses its best efforts to maintain the highest standards in providing services. Our professional fleet leaded by hundreds of experts let us to carry out over 80,000 logistics operations all over the world every year.
We assure individual approach and professional assistance.
I really would like you to verify this letter. I tried to make it 90% formal.
It is a cooperation request.
XXX Group Ltd. would like to support your corporation in the efficient transport and contribute generating revenue.
We also wanted to clarify that our interest in your company is not accidental. Your unit is certainly one of those where the level of services provided directly shifts into customer satisfaction. It is therefore certainly that we would like to establish cooperation and serve you in the manner you deserve.
Our company offers comprehensive solutions in the logistics of road, sea and air.
For 15 years XXX Group Ltd. uses its best efforts to maintain the highest standards in providing services. Our professional fleet leaded by hundreds of experts let us to carry out over 80,000 logistics operations all over the world every year.
We assure individual approach and professional assistance.
Top answer
Welcome to English Forums, Lukasz. Your writing looks like a Google translate. It does not make much sense.
- Welcome to English Forums, Lukasz.
- Your writing looks like a Google translate.
- It does not make much sense.
- Can you write what you want to say in very simple sentences?
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Welcome to English Forums, Lukasz.
Your writing looks like a Google translate. It does not make much sense.
Can you write what you want to say in very simple sentences?
Your writing looks like a Google translate. It does not make much sense.
Can you write what you want to say in very simple sentences?
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I wanted to say that:
1. my company is able to help other companies with transport, its effective
2. we could have mutual benefits
3. we didn't pick up this unit accidentally (corpo talking)
4. we are sure that this business is one of those where the level of services provided shifts into customer satisfaction
(all they care is customer's satisfaction and they get it by
1. my company is able to help other companies with transport, its effective
2. we could have mutual benefits
3. we didn't pick up this unit accidentally (corpo talking)
4. we are sure that this business is one of those where the level of services provided shifts into customer satisfaction
(all they care is customer's satisfaction and they get it by
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*** Group Ltd. would like to provide road, sea, and air transportation and logistics services to your company. We selected you after a careful consideration of your business and an assessment of potential mutual benefits. We have been in operation for fifteen years and operate globally. Our fleet and logistics experts handle over 80 thousand logistics operations per year. Customer satisfaction a
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